書(shū)面表達(dá)（1）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：二班的同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)有關(guān)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的討論。討論的題目是：學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)要不要從兒童時(shí)期開(kāi)始？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為 另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

1．應(yīng)從兒童時(shí)期開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)

2．兒童時(shí)期記憶力好，可以記住很多單詞

3．能為以后的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ) 1．不應(yīng)從兒童時(shí)期開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)

2．兒童時(shí)期既要學(xué)漢語(yǔ)拼音又要學(xué)英語(yǔ)，易混淆

3．會(huì)影響漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)和今后的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)

討論未取得一致意見(jiàn)

一、選擇要點(diǎn)

1．贊同兒童時(shí)期開(kāi)始學(xué)英語(yǔ)。

2．兒童記憶力好，記單詞多。

3．為今后打基礎(chǔ)。

4．反對(duì)從兒童時(shí)期開(kāi)始學(xué)英語(yǔ)。

5．既學(xué)漢語(yǔ)拼音又學(xué)英語(yǔ)易混淆。

6．影響今后的漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)的學(xué)習(xí)。

7．結(jié)論：未取得一致意見(jiàn)

二、簡(jiǎn)譯要點(diǎn)

1.agree/think that children should start to learn English from childhood.

agree/think that English learning should start from childhood

2.Children have a very good memory.The can learn a lot of English words by heart.

3.in order to lay a solid foundation for their future English learning

help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning

4.not think/agree that children should start to learn English from childhood.

not think/agree that English learning should start from childhood

5.study both Chinese pinyin and English at the same time,easyto mix them up

6.have a side effect not only on their future Chinese learning but also on their future English learning

7.In a word, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet .

三、擴(kuò)展合并要點(diǎn)

1.Some of them agree/think that children should start to learn English from childhood.

2/3.As children have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart,which will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning.

4.But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school .

5. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time , it will be very easy for them to mix them up .

6.This will have a side effect not only on their future Chinese learning but also on their future English learning

7. In a word, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet .

四、整理成文

One Possible Version

The students of Class 2 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning

English from childhood . Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood . As little boys and girls have a very good memory ,they can learn a lot of English words by heart . This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning . But others do not agree . Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school . If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time , it will be very easy for them to mix them up . This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning . In short , the students have not arrived at any agreement yet .

書(shū)面表達(dá)（2）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：五月四日，高三年級(jí)一班和二班之間將進(jìn)行一次有關(guān)環(huán)保問(wèn)題的演講比賽(a talk show on environment protection)。此前，二班邀請(qǐng)清華大學(xué)的Dr Li做相關(guān)內(nèi)容的報(bào)告。

假定你是二班的班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你草擬一個(gè)有關(guān)報(bào)告會(huì)的口頭通知。

注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括提示及表格內(nèi)的全部要點(diǎn)；詞數(shù)在100左右；開(kāi)頭己為你寫(xiě)好。

報(bào)告內(nèi)容 近些年北京的環(huán)境問(wèn)題及己取得的進(jìn)步

地點(diǎn) 教學(xué)樓三樓會(huì)議廳auditorium

時(shí)間 4月30日，星期三下午2：00

目的 幫助大家收集信息，為演講做好準(zhǔn)備

參加者 全班同學(xué)

其他安排 會(huì)后討論

May I have your attention, please?

As you know, our class will have a talk show on environment protection with Class One on May4th. Before it takes place ,we

一、選擇要點(diǎn)

1. 演講比賽前，我班將邀請(qǐng)清華大學(xué)的Dr Li做相關(guān)內(nèi)容的報(bào)告

2. 報(bào)告內(nèi)容：近些年北京的環(huán)境問(wèn)題及己取得的進(jìn)步

3. 報(bào)告的地點(diǎn)：教學(xué)樓三樓會(huì)議廳auditorium

4. 報(bào)告的時(shí)間：4月30日，星期三下午2：00

5. 報(bào)告的目的：幫助大家收集信息，為演講做好準(zhǔn)備

6. 全班同學(xué)參加聽(tīng)報(bào)告

7. 報(bào)告會(huì)后討論

二、譯出要點(diǎn)

1.Before the talk show, we will invite Dr. Li from Qinghua University to give us a talk on the environment problem.

2.His talk will tell us about the improvement in environment protection in recent years in Beijing.

3.The report/talk will begin in the auditorium on the third floor in the teaching building.

4. The report/talk will begin at 2:00 pm on Wednesday, April 30th .

5. The report/talk will help us get enough information to make good preparations for the coming talk show.

6. Every one of us should get there on time to listen to the report.

7. We will have a discussion after the report.

三、合并要點(diǎn)

1-2. Before the talk show, we will invite Dr. Li from Qinghua University to give us a talk on the environment problem and he will tell us about the improvement in environment protection in recent years in Beijing.

3-4. The report will begin at 2:00 pm on Wednesday, April 30th, in the auditorium on the third floor in the teaching building.

5-6. The report/talk will help us get enough information to make good preparations for the coming talk show so every one of us should get there on time to listen to it.

四、增加要點(diǎn)

Please make full notes while listening to the report because we will have a discussion after the report.

五、整理修飾成文

May I have your attention, please?

As you know, our class will have a talk show on environment protection with Class One on May 4th. Before it takes place ,we will invite Dr. Li from Qinghua University to give us a talk on the environment problem and he will tell us about the improvement in environment protection in recent years in Beijing. The report will begin at 2:00 pm on Wednesday, April 30th, in the auditorium on the third floor in the teaching building. The report will help us get enough information to make good preparations for the coming talk show so every one of us should get there on time to listen to it.By the way, please make full notes while listening to the report because we will have a discussion after the report.

That’s all. Thank you.

書(shū)面表達(dá)（3）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：根據(jù)下列六幅圖所反映的內(nèi)容，結(jié)合寫(xiě)作提示，以“Changes In Our Life”為題寫(xiě)一篇

120左右的短文。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示：過(guò)去寄信、聽(tīng)收音機(jī)、住房擁擠

現(xiàn)在打電話、看電視、住房寬敞

設(shè)想一下圖中所反映的過(guò)去到現(xiàn)在的變化就發(fā)生在你的家里。圖中人物就是你、你的父母。還要講明變化的大體時(shí)間（可根據(jù)常識(shí)）

一、提煉要點(diǎn)

1、與外界聯(lián)系方式上的變化

過(guò)去：父輩寄信與別人聯(lián)系

現(xiàn)在：我們可以在家里打電話與別人聯(lián)系

2、獲取信息方面的變化

過(guò)去：父輩聽(tīng)收音機(jī)獲取信息

現(xiàn)在：我們看電視獲取信息

3、居住條件方面的變化

過(guò)去：父輩結(jié)婚時(shí)住在一間擠滿家具的小房間里

現(xiàn)在：我們已經(jīng)搬進(jìn)了兩層樓的樓房里了（可以設(shè)想）

總結(jié)點(diǎn)題：過(guò)去二十年的變化給我們帶來(lái)了什么（可以設(shè)想）

二、簡(jiǎn)要譯出要點(diǎn)

1、In the past my parents got in touch with others by sending letters but now we can get in touch with others over the telephone at home.

2、In the past my parents listened to the radio for news and other information,but now we can get much news and information by watching TV.

3、In the past when my parents got married about twenty years ago,they had to live in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a two-storeyed building with

quite a few rooms inside it.

In short,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us a lot of happiness and convenience.

三、增加要點(diǎn)

Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example.

Another big change is that our housing conditions have been improved

四、修飾成文

Changes In Our Life

Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. In the past my parents got in touch with others by sending letters but now we can get in touch with others over the telephone at home.And my parents used to listen to the radio for news and other information,but now we can get much more news and information by watching TV. Another big change is that our housing conditions have been improved. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents had to live in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a two-storeyed building with quite a few rooms inside it.

In short,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us a lot of happiness and convenience.

書(shū)面表達(dá)（4）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：假如你叫李華，2003年1月20日下午3:00去長(zhǎng)城賓館通知Smith先生去聽(tīng)演講，不巧Smith先生不在，請(qǐng)你給他留個(gè)便條，按活動(dòng)日程表簡(jiǎn)述活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，按所給路線圖寫(xiě)明步行去科學(xué)宮的路線。（詞數(shù)：100左右）

時(shí)間：明天上午8點(diǎn) 地點(diǎn)：科學(xué)宮

主講人：南京大學(xué)王教授 內(nèi)容：污染問(wèn)題

（1）the Great Wall Hotel （2）traffic light

（3）post-office （4）the Science Palace

一、選擇要點(diǎn)

1、來(lái)通知你有關(guān)演講的事，碰巧出去了,得留個(gè)便條給你。

2、交代演講時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、演講人、演講內(nèi)容

明天上午8點(diǎn) 、科學(xué)宮、南京大學(xué)王教授 、污染問(wèn)題

3、告訴到科學(xué)宮怎么去：

步行去， 出了旅館左拐彎、沿路走，來(lái)到有交通燈的地方。然后右拐彎，穿過(guò)第一個(gè)

十字路口，往前走，穿過(guò)第二個(gè)十字路口�？吹揭患亦]局，科學(xué)宮就在郵局的對(duì)面。

二、簡(jiǎn)單翻譯

1. come to inform you of a speech,happen to be out,leave you the note

2.a lecture /a speech

at 8:00 tomorrow morning,in the Science Palace,Professor Wang from Nanjing University, on/about pollution

3.walk there/go there on foot,get out of the hotel,turn left,walk down/along the street,come to a traffic light,turn right,cross the first crossing,go forward/straight ahead,go across the second crossing，see a post office, the Science Palace right opposite to it/on the other side.

三、擴(kuò)展成句

I came to inform you of a speech.You happened to be out.I have to leave you the note.

There will be a speech on pollution in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning.It will be made/given/dilivered by Professor Wang from Nanjing University.

You can go there on foot.Get out of the hotel.Turn left.Walk down the street.Come to a traffic light.Turn right.Cross the first crossing .Go forward.Go across the second crossing.See a post office. The Science Palace is right opposite to it /on the other side of the street.

四、合并要點(diǎn)

I came to inform you of a speech but you happened to be out.So I have to leave you the note.

There will be a speech on pollution given by Professor Wang from Nanjing University in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning.

You can go there on foot.When you get out of the hotel, turn left and walk down the street until you come to a traffic light,and there turn right,cross the first crossing and go straight ahead.Then go across the second crossing and you’ll see a post office. The Science Palace is right opposite to it.

五、增加要點(diǎn)

If you are interested in the lecture, please get to the Science Palace before 8:00./You are expected to listen to the speech.

The Science Palace is not far from the Great Wall Hotel

六、整理成文（注意便條的格式）

January 20, 2003

Dear Mr. Smith,

Today I came to inform you of a speech but you happened to be out.So I have to leave you the note.

There will be a speech on pollution made by Professor Wang from Nanjing University in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning. If you are interested in the lecture, please get to the Science Palace before 8:00.

The Science Palace is not far from the Great Wall Hotel. You can go there on foot.When you get out of the hotel, turn left and walk down the street until you come to a traffic light,and there turn right,cross the first crossing and go straight ahead.Then go across the second crossing and you’ll see a post office. The Science Palace is right opposite to it.

Yours truly

Li Hua

書(shū)面表達(dá)（5）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：假如你是學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)的記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息寫(xiě)一篇英文稿，簡(jiǎn)要報(bào)道中國(guó)開(kāi)發(fā)西部的有關(guān)情況。

主要情況：范圍--9個(gè)省，自治區(qū)(autonomous regions)，一個(gè)直轄市（municipality）

面積--540萬(wàn)平方公里

人口--2.85億

實(shí)施要點(diǎn)：交通建設(shè)--修建多條公路鐵路

環(huán)境保護(hù)--退耕還林，防治污染

資源利用--開(kāi)發(fā)利用其豐富天然資源

人才引進(jìn)--廣納各類(lèi)專(zhuān)家技術(shù)人員

注意：1、短文須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)：適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使內(nèi)容連貫。

2、短文開(kāi)頭已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3、詞數(shù)100-120

一、簡(jiǎn)要譯出要點(diǎn)

9 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality, 5.4 million square kilometers a

population of 285 million

build many highways and railways

protect nature, return farmland to forest, prevent pollution

exploit and make use of rich natural resources

bring in experts and skilled workers

二、擴(kuò)展成句：

1.In Western China there are 9 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality.

2.It covers 5.4 million square kilometers.

3.It has a population of 285 million.

4.Many highways and railways will be built.

5.To protect nature and prevent pollution,farmers will return their farmland to forest.

6.Rich natural resources can be exploited and made use of.

7.All kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.

三、合并要點(diǎn)

1.2.3.In Western China there are 9 provinces and autonomous regions and one

municipality，covering 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285

million.

四、增加要點(diǎn)

The government will pay special attention to improving their transportation system.

They will take some measures/do something to protect nature and prevent pollution.

With the development of industry and agriculture in this part

We are sure that such great efforts made by the government will be paid off.

The people there will improve their living conditions.

Our country will become richer and stronger.

五、修飾成文

New Development for Central and western China.

The Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western China.

This part of China includes 9 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality, covering an area of 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285 million.

The government will pay special attention to their transportation system. Some highways and railways will be built. To protect nature, farmers will return farmland to forest. Also, measures should be taken to prevent pollution. Western China is rich in natural resources, which can be exploited and made full use of. To meet the needs of the development, all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.

We have every reason to believe that the efforts of the government will be a great success. As a result of the great project, the central and western regions of China will surely achieve greater and faster development in the new century. The people will have a better life and China will surely be richer and stronger.(153 words)

書(shū)面表達(dá)（6）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

根據(jù)下列提供要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇120字左右的短文。

注意：不要直接翻譯要點(diǎn)；要注意加標(biāo)題。

雪梅鎮(zhèn)是一個(gè)（依山傍水）的小鎮(zhèn)。過(guò)去這里的人們生活極其貧困。解放后，人們生活的各個(gè)方面都發(fā)生了巨大的變化。

人口：約8萬(wàn)

面積：約36平方公里

基本情況：坐落在太行山腳下，面臨一條大河。新建有許多工廠、商店、醫(yī)院、學(xué)校等

解放前只有一所學(xué)校。只有富家子弟可以上學(xué)�，F(xiàn)在有7所學(xué)校，每個(gè)孩子都可以上學(xué)

生活豐富多彩。人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參加體育活動(dòng)等。

第一步：簡(jiǎn)譯要點(diǎn)

1.Xuemei Town,a small town,in the past the people there,live a hard life,after liberation,great changes,take place in people’s everyday life

2.a population of 80 thousand

3.an area of 36 square kilometers.

4.at the foot of Taihang Mountain,face a big river/in front of it a big river.build many factories,shops,hospitals and schools

5.before liberation only one school,the children from the rich families,go to school.now 7 schools,every child,go to school

6.live a colorful life.after work/in their spare time,go shopping,go to the cinema,go dancing,have sports/take part in sports/join in the games

第二步：擴(kuò)展成句（注意動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題）

1.Xuemei Town is a small town.In the past the people there lived a hard life.After liberation,great changes took place in people’s everyday life.

2.It has a population of 80 thousand

3.It covers an area of 36 square kilometers.

4.It lies /stands at the foot of Taihang Mountain.It faces a big river/In front of it there is/flows a big river.Many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built there.

5.Before liberation there was only one school.The children from the rich families could go to school.Now there are 7 schools.Every child can go to school

6.They live a colorful life.After work/in their spare time they can go shopping,go to the cinema,go dancing,have sports/take part in sports/join in the games.

第三步、合并要點(diǎn)（注意句式的變化/變換）

1.Xuemei Town is a small town ， （4）which lies /stands at the foot of Taihang Mountain,facing a big river.(In front of the town there is/flows a big river). (2).It has a population of 80 thousand,(3).covering an area of 36 square kilometers..

In the past the people there lived a hard life.After liberation,great changes took place in people’s everyday life.Many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built there.

5.Before liberation there was only one school.The children from the rich families could go to school.Now there are 7 schools.Every child can go to school

6.They live a colorful life.After work/in their spare time they can go shopping,go to the cinema,go dancing,have sports/take part in sports/join in the games.

第四步：修飾成文（注意加標(biāo)題）

Great Changes in Xuemei Town

Xuemei Town is a small town which lies at the foot of Taihang Mountain,facing a big river..It has a population of 80 thousand,covering an area of 36 square kilometers..

In the past the people there lived a hard life.Since liberation,great changes have taken place in people’s everyday life.Many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built there.

The school education has also improved.Before liberation there was only one school so only the children from the rich families could go to school.Now there are 7 schools.Every child can go to school

Now the people there have been leading a colorful life.In their spare time they can go shopping,go to the cinema,go dancing,have sports.

In a word,Xuemei Town has been taking on a new look here and there.

書(shū)面表達(dá)（7）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：假如你是某英文報(bào)刊的通訊員，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格以A Big Forest Fire為題，寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)單報(bào)導(dǎo)：(詞數(shù)100-120)

起火地點(diǎn) 美國(guó)西南部森林

起火時(shí)間 一九九二年十一月末

火因 一青年工人吸煙

持續(xù)時(shí)間 三個(gè)多星期

參加救火人員 數(shù)千名消防隊(duì)員及當(dāng)?shù)鼐用?/p>

傷亡人數(shù) 九人死亡，約八十人受傷

經(jīng)濟(jì)損失 至少兩千萬(wàn)美元

影響 震驚全國(guó)

簡(jiǎn)單翻譯要點(diǎn)

1、A forest big fire broke out in the forest in southwest of America.

2、The fire broke out at the end of November of 1992.

3、It was caused by a young worker’s smoking.

4、It lasted more than three weeks.

5、Local people joined thousands of firemen in fighting against the fire.

6、Nine people were killed and about eighty people were injured.

7、It caused a loss of at least twenty million US dollars.

8、It shocked the whole country.

增加要點(diǎn)

They couldn’t put it out in a short time.

It was finally put out.

合并要點(diǎn)連句成文

A Big Forest Fire

A big forest fire broke out in the forest in southwest of America at the end of November of 1992. The fire was caused by a young worker’s smoking cigarettes. Thousands of firemen and local people tried to put out the fire, but they couldn’t put it out in a short time. The fire lasted more than three weeks and was finally put out.

In the fire nine people died and about eighty people were injured. It caused a loss of at least twenty million US dollars. The fire shocked the whole country.

書(shū)面表達(dá)（8）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

下列四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)畫(huà)面及圖中的有關(guān)提示，用第三人稱(chēng)的口吻寫(xiě)一篇120字左右的短文。

注意：可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并展開(kāi)合理的想象，使故事完整連貫。

1、認(rèn)真看圖，確立主題

結(jié)合文字和圖畫(huà)，確立所要表達(dá)的主題是什么。

根據(jù)“四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經(jīng)歷”一段文字提示,結(jié)合第一幅圖中的日歷上所表示的時(shí)間（3月8日），我們可以確立本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的主題是：李華要做些家務(wù)事來(lái)為他的媽媽?xiě)c�！�3.8”婦女節(jié)

2、圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)

圍繞確立的主題，仔細(xì)看圖，初步列出每幅圖的要點(diǎn)。

第一幅圖：李華把他的主意告訴父親

第二幅圖：李華掃地、父親洗衣服

第三幅圖：李華和父親下廚房做菜

第四幅圖：餐桌上有花瓶、飲料、魚(yú)、肉等等

3、合理想象，補(bǔ)出要點(diǎn)

將四幅圖連起來(lái)并結(jié)合考慮每幅圖中的各個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行想象，將隱藏的要點(diǎn)補(bǔ)出來(lái),使故事連貫。

第一幅圖：李華為什么要把他的主意告訴父親：求得父親的幫助或配合

第二幅圖：李華和父親為什么要選擇做家務(wù)：這些家務(wù)平時(shí)都是由母親做的

第三幅圖：可以想象他們做了除圖畫(huà)中表現(xiàn)出的:fish, pork外，還可能做了其它菜。比如：chicken, soup and other delicious dishes.

第四幅圖：這幅圖中沒(méi)有一個(gè)人出現(xiàn)，連母親的影子也沒(méi)有。為什么，留給考生進(jìn)行合理的想象：李華和父親是不是藏起來(lái)了？其目的是什么：可能是等母親回家時(shí)以給她一個(gè)驚喜。

4、確定時(shí)態(tài)，譯出要點(diǎn)

確定表達(dá)時(shí)所用的正確時(shí)態(tài)，將圍繞主題初選出的要點(diǎn)和經(jīng)過(guò)合理想象補(bǔ)出的要點(diǎn)翻譯出來(lái)。

本篇敘述的是李華一家過(guò)去某一天（“3.8”婦女節(jié)）所發(fā)生的事，應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)進(jìn)行表達(dá)。

第一幅圖：On March the eighth,Women’s Day, Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it.He asked his father to help him.

第二幅圖：They decided to do some housework,which was always done by his mother.Li Hua cleaned the house completely.His father did some washing.

第三幅圖：They made a good meal,cooking fish,pork,chicken,soup and some other delicious dishes.

第四幅圖：Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table.They hid themselves behind the door,waiting for Mother.They wanted to give her a happy surprise.When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy.

5、連句成篇，過(guò)渡自然

對(duì)譯出的要點(diǎn)通過(guò)合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞或詞語(yǔ)以及照顧到文章的首尾呼應(yīng)，

再加上必要的結(jié)束語(yǔ)。

It was March the eighth that day,Women’s Day.Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it.He asked his father to help him.First they decided to do some housework,which was always by his mother.Li Hua cleaned the house completely while his father did some washing.Then they made a good meal,cooking fish,pork,chicken,soup and some other delicious dishes. Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table.After that they hid themselves behind the door,waiting for Mother so as to give her a happy surprise.When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy.The family had a pleasant festival.

書(shū)面表達(dá)（9）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列英語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的短文。短文的開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，請(qǐng)你接著寫(xiě)。

開(kāi)頭句：Many countries in the world are faced with the problems of increasing population and a shortage of food.

Subject（主題）

In some countries there is hardly enough food for the growing population.suggest some ways in which this problem might be solved.

Plan and ideas（提綱）

Introduction

1.Problem of population and food rises in world population

Development

Possible solutions（解決辦法）

2.Discourage large families.

3.Modernise farming and develop land to produce more food.

4.Export(出口)resources to import food.

Conclusion

5.Solutions not easy,but problem can be solved.

Many countries in the world are faced with the problems of an increasing population and a shortage of food.(開(kāi)頭句)

1、審題看要點(diǎn)：要看懂用英語(yǔ)所提供的要點(diǎn)；要弄清那些是我們?cè)诒磉_(dá)時(shí)需要寫(xiě)出的內(nèi)容。

2、將題中2、3、4要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句

（Government）should take measures to discourage people from

having large families.

The people should modernize their farming and develop land to

produce more food.

Many countries should export their resources to import food.

3、通過(guò)想象，邏輯推理補(bǔ)出要點(diǎn)

1）、根據(jù)已給出的句子：Many countries in the world are faced with the problems of increasing population and a shortage of food補(bǔ)出下列要點(diǎn)，以便上下文的銜接：We have some ways to solve the problems/It is possible to solve the problems/There are a number of possible solutions to the problems/A number of possible ways can be used to solve the problems.

2）、根據(jù)結(jié)論:Solutions not easy,but problem can be solved的提示我們應(yīng)該補(bǔ)出這一要點(diǎn)，以引起下面的話題：(but)none of the solutions is easy.

3）、根據(jù)第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充：(聯(lián)想到我國(guó)一對(duì)夫婦只生一個(gè)孩子的國(guó)策)encourage a couple to have just one child(to discourage people from having large families以保持上下文敘述的連貫。

4）、根據(jù)第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)找出為什么要提出該建議（假設(shè)一下）：farming methods in those countries are very simple and often inefficient./farming methods in those countries are out of date.怎么使得農(nóng)業(yè)現(xiàn)代化比如可以：the people can buy new agricultural machines/machinery(and learn how to farm scientifically).使你的建議才能做到有根有據(jù)，以理服人。

5）、根據(jù)第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)不妨加上:出口一些什么原料(many countries can export their natural resources) such as oil,wood,coal or iron…以使你的建議更具體。

6）、考慮到文章的首尾呼應(yīng)的問(wèn)題，同時(shí)又表示建議人的謙虛，可加上下面的話：the suggestions of mine are for your reference only.If people mean to solve the problems （of increasing population and food shortage）,they must have more and better methods to settle the problems more easily.

再看一看本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是你要提的建議，故要考慮你的表達(dá)的語(yǔ)氣：客氣有禮貌。最后加上必要的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)連句成篇：(Many countries in the world are faced with the problems of increasing population and a shortage of food.)

I think a number of possible ways can be used to solve the problems, but none of them is easy.

Firstly, government could take measures to encourage a couple to have just one child in order to discourage them from having a larger family.

Secondly, farming methods in those countries are out of date. If the people bought new agricultural machines and learned how to farm scientifically ,they might modernize their farming methods and develop more land to produce enough food for themselves.

Thirdly many countries could export their natural resources such as oil, wood, coal or iron to import food.

The suggestions of mine are for your reference only, but only if people mean to solve the problems, they

must have more and better methods to settle the problems more easily.

書(shū)面表達(dá)（10）評(píng)講簡(jiǎn)案

試題：新東電視臺(tái)與新東市教學(xué)研究室（Xindong Teaching Research Office）聯(lián)合開(kāi)播了一個(gè)新的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)節(jié)目New Standard English.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容，以“歡迎收看新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語(yǔ)節(jié)目”為題用英文寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)10 0左右的報(bào)道。

節(jié)目名稱(chēng) 對(duì)象及目的 開(kāi)播日期 播出時(shí)間 頻道

新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語(yǔ) 小學(xué)生

從Book 3A開(kāi)始，激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)興趣，強(qiáng)化聽(tīng)說(shuō)能力。 自2003年10月

1日開(kāi)始 每天上午8∶30-9∶00晚上6∶30-7∶00重播 二頻道

TV-2

第一步：選擇要點(diǎn)

1、 新東電視臺(tái)與新東市教學(xué)研究室聯(lián)合開(kāi)播了一個(gè)新的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)節(jié)目

2、 文章標(biāo)題：歡迎收看新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語(yǔ)節(jié)目

3、 節(jié)目名稱(chēng)：新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語(yǔ)

4、 對(duì)象及目的：小學(xué)生,從Book 3A開(kāi)始，激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)興趣，強(qiáng)化聽(tīng)說(shuō)能力

5、 開(kāi)播日期：自2003年10月1日開(kāi)始

6、 播出時(shí)間：每天上午8∶30-9∶00，晚上6∶30-7∶00重播

7、 頻道：二頻道TV-2

第二步：簡(jiǎn)要翻譯要點(diǎn)

1、 Xindong TV Station and Xindong Teaching Research Office united to broadcast a new English teaching program

2、 Welcome to the Program-New Standard English

3、 New Standard English

4、 primary pupils, begin with Book 3 A,get them interested in English, improve themselves in listening and speaking

5、 The program was broadcast on October 1,2003

6、 The program is broadcast from 8:30 to 9:00 am and repeated from 6:30 to 7:00 pm

7、 The program is broadcast by Xindong Station-TV-2

第三步：合并要點(diǎn)

1、Xindong TV Station and Xindong Teaching Research Office united to broadcast

a new English teaching program, New Standard English, on October 1,2003

2、The program begins with Book 3 A ,which intends to get the primary pupils

interested in English and help them improve themselves in listening and speaking

3、The program is broadcast from 8:30 to 9:00 am and repeated from 6:30 to 7:00 m

4、The program is broadcast by Xindong Station-TV-2

第四步：添加過(guò)渡句并加以修飾成文

Welcome to the program-New Standard English

On October 1,2003,Xindong TV Station and Xindong Teaching Research Office united to broadcast a new English teaching program,New Standard English.The program begins with Book 3A,which intends to get the primary pupils interested in English and help them improve themselves in listening and speaking.The interesting program is broadcast from 8:30 to 9:00 am and repeated from 6:30 to 7:00 pm. You can choose when to enjoy it,but make sure you don’t miss it.

Welcome to the program-New Standard English.